Scream Murder sketch

...and, finally, one more deviation to submit before I allow myself to sleep. I have submitted three things in one night. My conscious is clear.

Bit-o-explanation to go with this one. I was trying (and failing -_-) to do some drawing in the style of Gris Grimly (his work is here [link] ) and I came up with this charming fellow in another notebook. I then added long, stringy black hair and suddenly he reminded me of a song by Savatage called "Scream Murder". I decided to call him that for now, seeing as in the song they say that title almost as if it were his name.

I'm going to try to ink this... I wanted you all to see it before I kill it with my pen.

For GOD'S SAKE peoples, please tell me anything you see wrong with this drawing - it is my final chance!!! Do it for the insane psycho-killer!!!!!

Oh, and go listen to the song --> [link]

Scream murder, he's comin' for you
Blade in his hand, he knows what to do
Yeah

Scream murder, what can you do
No one to help
It's just him and you!